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BeeJay
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Forever Distorted Dots

Post by BeeJay » Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:29 pm

Forever Distorted


The dot
Primordial origin of a line
Moves on to shape the universe
Often meets a corner
Triangles of deceit.
Latticed together
Forever.

The dot
The beginning of thought
Images woven in the sublime
Mind, the keeper
Storage vaults of time.
Most often
Distorted.

The dot
The end and the beginning
Forever misty images
Then light
Momentary clarity
A pause
Circles.


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If the Universe was a little smaller , I may just be able to reach out to you. Copyright © 2009 Baru Gobira
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Re: Forever Distorted Dots

Post by heinzs » Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:18 pm

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Re: Forever Distorted Dots

Post by bags123 » Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:34 pm

Ah yes,....the beginning and end of everything. Well versed my friend. :cheers:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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