Re-captured (a nonet)

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GoddessErika
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Re-captured (a nonet)

Post by GoddessErika » Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:54 pm

<center>You tore down my walls and brought me pain
Left poison burning in my veins
Led me to my own demise
Corrupted me with lies
And now I'm broken
A hollow shell
Imprisoned
In this
Hell
© Anarcha Erika Basta
Behind this pretty smile is a story you'll never understand.
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Gillian
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Post by Gillian » Tue Feb 20, 2007 1:32 pm

I have respect for anyone who can carry themselves with the 'style' that you do.

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Graeme
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ouch

Post by Graeme » Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:42 pm

I hope you dumped the jerk! Powerful. I love concise poetry.
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Hiyu
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Post by Hiyu » Wed Mar 28, 2007 1:47 am

i'm a man.

And through this poem, i see a woman's perspective so well...
Action is what differentiates reality from fantasy.
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