Your Wandering Heart (an acrostic)

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Your Wandering Heart (an acrostic)

Post by GoddessErika » Mon Nov 13, 2006 5:00 pm

Impulse driven irresponsibility
Numbs the heart while
Fidelity falls victim to
Illicit behavior
Deviance replaces a love
Ever true.
Loyalty dissolves
Into the distance and now,
Trust no longer belongs to
You
© Anarcha Erika Basta
Behind this pretty smile is a story you'll never understand.

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Post by Friend_forever » Tue Nov 21, 2006 7:29 am

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And as I watch you in this light
I never realized your eyes were full of
So many colors.
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Post by GoddessErika » Fri Dec 01, 2006 8:44 am

Nosh... hence the message in the poem... it's a one word summary of why I'm not so ok lately... Of course, it was back at the beginning of September, but I'm still feeling it. I'm guessing I probably always will... :cry:
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Post by negatvone » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:52 am

It eases with time, Erika. You never will forget, but it becomes less of a burdon after time. This is comming from someone who has dealt with it for years.
Entering the sanctuary of my mind may lead to perils of unknown magnitude.......... hold on and embrace the ride. Feel the tolls as we pass from existance into my sought domain of twisted reality. -negatv: 5/05-

If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.

Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06

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Post by GoddessErika » Sat Dec 02, 2006 10:18 am

But I don't want to deal with it! I want to know that I won't have to deal with it! I think I must have missed it when society suddenly decided that was too much to ask of someone! :no:
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Post by negatvone » Sat Dec 02, 2006 10:23 am

I don't either, Erika. I just live life one minute to the next.

Remember this: Don't sweat the small stuff..... it is all small stuff. That hurts me everytime I think of it, but I look deeper into the meaning.... and it all comes clear.

There is someone out there that will do you the way you need to be done. This is comming from a man that is head over heels for a woman with 4 kids. Trust me when I say it.

They may not be biologically mine, but I claim them just the same.

Trust me.
Entering the sanctuary of my mind may lead to perils of unknown magnitude.......... hold on and embrace the ride. Feel the tolls as we pass from existance into my sought domain of twisted reality. -negatv: 5/05-

If I changed anything I have done in my life I wouldn't be me. Personally, I kinda like me. I'm an asshole, but I'm my kind of asshole.

Friends are what help me guide myself through life. I just have to find the right direction first. -negatv- 10/06

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Post by Angeleyes » Wed Dec 13, 2006 10:43 am

I love the write!!! One word says it all!!!!!!!! :grin:

:bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:



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Post by GoddessErika » Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:58 am

Thanx! I thought it got the point across quite nicely too!
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