The first time I saw her [Triolet]

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The first time I saw her [Triolet]

Post by richie » Mon Jul 03, 2006 10:34 am

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The first time I saw her


When first I saw her standing there
Beside me in the warm spring rain.
She was so flushed, and so fair
When first I saw her standing there.
The smile she smiled beyond compare
In my heart, nothing would be the same,
When first I saw her standing there
Beside me in the warm spring rain






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Post by northstar » Sun Jul 09, 2006 3:15 pm

..nice air and feeling
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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Post by richie » Sun Jul 09, 2006 11:12 pm

thank you very kind glad you liked it

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Post by heinzs » Thu Jul 05, 2007 11:22 am

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