pantoum (silent, quiet, still)
i sit here silent, quiet, still
thoughts wander and drift away
my heart aches with loneliness that kills
i close my eyes to dull the pain
thoughts wander and drift away
love is sought in dreams that die
i close my eyes to dull the pain
from this room my heart will fly
love is sought in dreams that die
may i die within my dreams
from this room my heart will fly
love wasn't what it seemed
may i die within my dreams
i sit here silent, quiet, still
love wasn't what it seemed
my heart aches with loneliness that kills
pantoum (silent, quiet, still)
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oo... just pray that it all gets better <img border="0" title="" alt="[Frown]" src="frown.gif" />
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<img border="0" alt="[ThumbsUp]" title="" src="graemlins/thumbsup.gif" /> Love it, Anxious!! The form strengthens the pain...
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