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Community Favorite: 12.25.06

Post by heinzs » Tue Dec 26, 2006 1:49 am

Winner of the Community Favorite Award: December 25, 2006
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Surrender
by negatvone

I am nothing more than a simple man
Wishing upon the clouds in this storm
Can it all be repaired, once again
I say amen

Raising my hands
Father feel my wounds
Heal them through
Time’s sands

You know my heart is torn

I need passage out of this torrential downpour

So, now I surrender it all
Take my pride, my sorrow, my joy
Take it all before I fall

It’s in your hands now, Lord
Everything inside of me
Everything you can afford

Carry me in this plea

Listening for the whispers to guide
Hoping not to backslide
Giving all I have in me

To keep me going in mid stride

I surrender it all
Before I fall

Guide me through this life
I’ve already lost one wife

It must’ve been your plan
After all….
I’m nothing more than a man

Something better has to be in store for me
Designed perfect in your plot of destiny

I surrender it all to you
I know that purity is true
Even though I have no clue
I surrender it all to you

Hold my hand, and walk me through

I surrender it all
Just to you
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Last edited by heinzs on Sun Dec 31, 2006 8:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Angeleyes » Thu Dec 28, 2006 6:06 pm

CONGRATS !!!



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I loved this poem as well!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

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Awesome Poem!!!!





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