Poem of the Week: September 5, 2004

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Poem of the Week: September 5, 2004

Post by heinzs » Sat Sep 04, 2004 10:58 am

Winner: Poem of the Week: September 5, 2004
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Art on Display
by Miyu

notice outside the sky is a fading blue
almost like gray, but the sun makes it
glistens on an August morning like what
our chandeliers do almost every evening
although tonight it seems like our clock
is consuming at the time as i lay listening
to the sound of your heartbeat as it
pounds inside my head and rythmatically
but here i lay once again holding you
and wanting to wrap your heart inside a
tourniquet to keep it from breaking in me
although i figured i might as well let go
and keep you breathing since being with
me, seems to be suffocating you... alive
i moved on watching you like a delicate
bouquet, or a piece of fine art on display
still, i'd rain for you like i do every spring
and even if you hate me now or still do
in the end i'd hate me too, because i'm a
fool for chasing after your fragile image
when i knew the reflection in the puddle
would never stay clear or still like it used to

miyu
August 21, 2004
Last edited by heinzs on Sat Sep 11, 2004 11:55 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by jhanke » Sun Sep 05, 2004 9:14 am

Well Deserved Miyu.. :mrgreen: :bow:
Maybe I should of buried the butterfly instead of picking it apart.

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Post by Miyu » Sun Sep 05, 2004 11:18 am

Thanks for nominating everyone. :oops: :cool: :mrgreen:

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Post by jhanke » Sat Sep 11, 2004 11:18 am

:mrgreen:
Maybe I should of buried the butterfly instead of picking it apart.

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Post by TheMillionHope » Sun Sep 12, 2004 4:47 pm

bravo! :mrgreen:

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