Questions From A Truth Seeker

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Altawell
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Questions From A Truth Seeker

Post by Altawell » Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:42 am

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Why I am here in this world?

Why those who loved and
Scarified most
Here and there
Are
Neglected
Or
Prosecuted
Or
Imprisoned
Or
Even
Killed
Just because they
Tried to help this world?


No one told me
No one guided me
No one explained
The absolute
Truth
Apart from
Their manmade religious thoughts
And
Their repetitive Hell and Heaven talk!


Please tell me
Why I am here in this world?


Boxed in a body
Like everybody
In a temporary
Unjust
Troubled
World!

With
Thought
After
Thought
After
Thought

Boiling in the mind
Day and night
Trying to figure out
The truth of
What is this all about!

Why I am here in this world?!



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Re: Questions From A Truth Seeker

Post by ShadowLover » Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:16 pm

i love the way you structered the poem and it has a very good point to it! well done :thumbsup:
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Re: Questions From A Truth Seeker

Post by Altawell » Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:36 am

ShadowLover wrote:i love the way you structered the poem and it has a very good point to it! well done :thumbsup:

Thank you for your message and for your kind words.
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Re: Questions From A Truth Seeker

Post by Travis » Sun Jun 03, 2012 7:51 pm

I like the passion and the emotion in this! Very creative structure! Continue to write...you have some wonderful talent!!

-Travis :thumbsup:
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Re: Questions From A Truth Seeker

Post by wgilstrap » Wed Nov 14, 2012 8:08 pm

Great Question.......Why?....Well why not?
Some people live their whole lives with people that they think they are the closest to, but really are the furthest away from.
William Charles Gilstrap

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