Cut Me From Ear to Ear

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Kamasui
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Location: Virginia

Cut Me From Ear to Ear

Post by Kamasui » Wed Apr 07, 2010 7:52 am

You break me down,
To the point I cannot move,
Under this light,
Everything looks ugly,
All cell phones off,
No room to talk,
I'm a fuck up,
Your not proud of me,
All i've done,
Means nothing in your eyes,
I try to explain myself,
but end up speaking in demonic tongues,
Senseless departure from this hell,
becomes enevitable,
The sooner,
The better.

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marcb

Re: Cut Me From Ear to Ear

Post by marcb » Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:43 am

Great read, I really feel the angst... hope this is not your true prespective? If it is at least your putting it to good use!

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xmartinx=]
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Location: London

Re: Cut Me From Ear to Ear

Post by xmartinx=] » Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:39 am

the classic interigation between parent and child. no cell phone(escape or distraction) and you try to tell the truth but your mouth speaks nothing but lies(demonic tounge). wishing for death, for an escape, for a chance to really...really live. trust me...i know the feeling. great work
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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