This burning,
An Acclamaton of my sins,
Along a Mountain side i tread,
Cold and desolate,
Salvation cries a rainbow in the sky,
A teardrop; forms an avalanche,
I look unto it,
And smile.
Last Stand
Re: Last Stand
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Re: Last Stand
oh kasumi i love you. epic, the teardrop, an avalanche, its actually decending(the word physically) and is falling down, like a tear and avalanche. you use and manipulate structure perfectly and i will scan this website for all your poems, and you better belive the comments you may/will recieve. woop woop
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "
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