butterflies. And rape.

[poetgirl122]

Hand in my palm.
(butterflies)
Stands close to me.
(butterflies)
Feel his breath, warm on my cheek.
(butterflies)
Whispers, "I love you."
(butterflies)
"I love you back."
(butterflies)
Kisses soft on my lips.
(butterflies)
Hands warm on my hips.
(butterflies)
Lips tickle against my neck.
(butterflies)
Hands explore.
(im not ready yet.)
His words quiet.."is this okay?"
(no...im not ready yet.)
"yes....its okay"
(im not ready yet...)
His body, covering mine.
(this isn't right...)
"Can I...?" He whispers, preparing for a yes.
(just say no, and he'll go.)
"I...yes."
(Stop.)
Clothes fall.
(just stop it, now. Before its too late.)
"Can we...stop. Please?"
(now he'll go.)
Hand covers mouth.
(whats he doing? I wanted to stop!)
mumbles under hand.
(no..)
"Shh....don't be a tease."
(but I wanted to stop!)
Struggles to leave.
(can't get free.)
"If people find out...they'll hate you."
(its not my fault..I can't make him stop!)
......................................................
.....................................................
Walks away.
(Heart races, tears multiply)
Sits alone in the empty room.
(I should have said no, when I was still in control.)
Under the covers, in a curled up shape.
(Another silent crime.)
A victom of rape.

[heinzs]

He probably thought this was seduction... It's a tough subject.

[xmartinx=]]

Wow. if this is true i am so sorry. the way the repition is used it creates such a sad attitude toward it. really well played =]

[Madhatter]

you have a power with your words that is rare, use it to combat this serious problem. men like him deserve no forgiveness or mercy.

[Moushka]

nO WHAS RAMPANT aLL THROUGH tHE POEM EXCELLENT POEM

[poetgirl122]

I wasn't raped, but thank you all. :] I was writing a story. And wrote this as a way of making myself relate more to my character, who is a rape victom.

[xmartinx=]]

wow still no matter how many times ive read this i still fall under your spell. absolute BRILLIANCE!!! im really made to feel for you and i have trouble weighing out whos fault it is and that my friend, is very rare indeed. =]