The Girl Whom I Love

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The Girl Whom I Love

Post by xmartinx=] » Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:06 am

When i speak your name,
Touch you skin or look into your eyes,
Id give my life id give my soul,
To never see you cry.

Sometimes i sit and wonder,
While sad and missing you,
How i found a girl in town,
With one a heart so true.

When i was young i used to think,
That you were just some fun,
But now i think not think but know,
That your my special one.

I'd give yo my eyes so you could see,
How beautiful you are to me,
I'll never strafe i'll never wonder,
All absence does is make the heart grow fonder.
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by heinzs » Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:50 pm

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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by xmartinx=] » Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:03 am

sorry about the spellin guys im gonna start putting it through word first.
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by heinzs » Fri Nov 27, 2009 4:09 pm

To some spelling detracts from the poetry. To others it is part of it, since it reflects the poet rather than society's rules. Shakespeare created his own spellings for many words.
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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by xmartinx=] » Mon Jun 14, 2010 1:37 am

ahh i see im in the presence of a fellow shakespeare fan, i love his work and think he was a great man, and my poems are sometimes revolved around him, my recent entry to a competition at poetry live! 2010 was one example. shame i didnt make a copy of it, i rather liked it...
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:30 pm

very nice :thumbsup:
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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by xmartinx=] » Sun Aug 01, 2010 2:21 pm

thank you =]
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by hockeychickkayla » Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:15 pm

:thumbsup:
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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by Amin » Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:03 am

EPIsode unter:

IF "the girl whom i love" THEN ERROR
GIRL a SHE

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Re: The Girl Whom I Love

Post by xmartinx=] » Sun Aug 15, 2010 4:26 pm

im sorry i dont understand? =[]
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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