Tango Fire

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Lenny
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Tango Fire

Post by Lenny » Wed Jun 10, 2009 7:28 pm

Catholics once decreed,
Tango, Adultery set to sound.
Sin in its pure greed,
Then love I have found.

Tantalizing attire,
Breast to breast,
Begin to perspire.
Light the Tango fire.

A slow embrace.
Dark passion play of fervor.
Sensuality and grace,
Eyes of desire.

Lingering hands caress.
Seek the hidden desire.
Once hated by the press.
sensual attire causes respire.

Sudden flirts,
Sexual prurience ensues.
Tango, a pleasure and a pain.
A poison no one can contain.

Pull me close to say,
Never think twice!
Enjoy the sensual play.
Dance in the romantic paradise.

Spins, dips
Skirts a flutter.
Swiveling hips,
Entwining legs make me shutter.

One last tango
One night firefly
Satin and silk ebb and flow.
Atavistic passion intensify.

Why deny one last dance,
and forgo the ecstasy?
Two bodies in a trance.
Your lips next to me.

Your body cries NO!
Your mind screams YES!
Indecisiveness makes the passion grow.
Your actions a digress.

This is Tango's sensuality
An open display
Shown with grace. I'd have it no other way.
Adultery's musicality.
Pride is the recognition of the fact that you are your own highest value and, like all of man’s values, it has to be earned.

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Re: Tango Fire

Post by heinzs » Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:51 pm

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Re: Tango Fire

Post by poetgirl122 » Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:43 pm

woww, this was completely amazing.
It was written so well, it was beautifull.
Completely. All I can say is well done, :thewave:
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Re: Tango Fire

Post by Lenny » Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:04 pm

poetgirl122 wrote:woww, this was completely amazing.
It was written so well, it was beautifull.
Completely. All I can say is well done, :thewave:
I am very exuburant that you like this vey much. I dance the Argentine Tango so it is great to know that I was able to let someone else see the beauty that is Argentine Tango :mrgreen:
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Re: Tango Fire

Post by poetgirl122 » Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:42 pm

Really?
I LOVE the tango.
I just can't dance it. :\ lol
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Re: Tango Fire

Post by Lenny » Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:25 pm

poetgirl122 wrote:Really?
I LOVE the tango.
I just can't dance it. :\ lol
sure you can, the key to it, and any dance for that matter is fake it and have fun!
Pride is the recognition of the fact that you are your own highest value and, like all of man’s values, it has to be earned.

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Re: Tango Fire

Post by xmartinx=] » Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:55 am

easilly one of the best ive read in a long time. both readings(sexual and dancing) provide beautful romantic imaigary as well as truth (body screams no, mind sreams yes). absolutly beautiful. look forward to the next installment
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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Re: Tango Fire

Post by Lenny » Fri Jan 28, 2011 1:46 am

Thank you all :grin:

I have another poem about Tango in progress and will be sure to post it soon!
If you are ever interested, I could link you to some vids of me dancing it sometime.
Pride is the recognition of the fact that you are your own highest value and, like all of man’s values, it has to be earned.

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Re: Tango Fire

Post by collinsfan85 » Sat Apr 02, 2011 5:49 pm

This poem takes the reader on a very pleasant trip through the actual overt gesture of the dance act and the covert thought processes active during the dancing. Very well written and truly from the soul! I enjoyed the fact that both the overt and covert aspects of the dance were included.

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