let me breath

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poetgirl122
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let me breath

Post by poetgirl122 » Fri May 22, 2009 1:39 pm

Though I stand,
lingering ever closely to death.
(Cold hands on my heart,
gasping for breath)
I know I'll hold on
till I've got nothing left
And even when im gone,
Still I will not leave.
Knees falling to the floor,
just...
Let. Me. Breathe.
***Im stronger than the strongest drug you ever had. Mix them all together and i'd still be twice as bad. I know you wants some more.***

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Re: let me breath

Post by heinzs » Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:45 pm

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Re: let me breath

Post by xmartinx=] » Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:01 am

great, desribes well the restraints of life and the amount of pressure placed on ones self. sometime you wish you could just float into the sky and have all the space and freedom you need
thanks for reading!!! =] " ill never strafe, ill never wonder, all absence does is make the heart grow fonder "

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