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Queen
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nose candy

Post by Queen » Wed Apr 29, 2009 10:48 am

Nose candy


Rock and roll baby! Lose control maybe
forget all about what really happens
forget all about the unhappiness
rock and roll honey! spend up all the money
tired of living tight, tired of doing right
Give me dance,
give me drugs,
give me sweat all night
rock and roll nasty! don’t wanna be classy
and V.I.P just ain’t for me
But rolled up hundreds don’t come cheap
Can’t stop now, in way too deep
Can’t go slow
Can’t say no
Forget the sunrise, don’t need sleep
Rock and roll lover! Dirty undercover
Bodies all over me moving in unison
Music connects the mass, weaving us into one.
throbbing beats
The bass line repeats
and words from the song blow like a shotgun!
BOOM!
Rock and roll, fun! Rock and roll, young!
Strung out…
Joke…
Lonely…
Broke…
Gonna go home now, Rock and roll done!

See ya next weekend Love,
Nose candy
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....

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Re: nose candy

Post by bags123 » Fri May 01, 2009 6:54 am

I dig the rhythm. You need a set of bongos playing in the background when you read it. :cool:
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Re: nose candy

Post by Queen » Fri May 01, 2009 8:24 am

it is kind rhythmic i guess but i would use spoons instead of bongos hahahahaha just kidding :lol: :cheers:
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Re: nose candy

Post by bags123 » Fri May 01, 2009 8:45 pm

Queen wrote:it is kind rhythmic i guess but i would use spoons instead of bongos hahahahaha just kidding :lol: :cheers:
Spoons,.... yes,....I would assume so. :computer:
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