My heart is breaking!!

[pixie dust]

My heart is Breaking.
Yes, I love you,
But you don't love me.
I have been crying for the pasted
two days & This is my thrid day!
Now, It will be my last.
For you hurt hurt me,
You will never have me again.
Your missing out on alot & lost
something grand.
I thought you was forever.
But I found out the hard
way that you was like all the rest.
Just a dang dog like all the rest!

[Debbie]

one can feel your exhaustion and pain in here...

[pixie dust]

Thank you...Thats what I was going for!

[Odd D]

Nice poem, as always, Pixie. Situations like these are all too common (I say this, of course, because I am kind of going through something similar,) and poetry is often a good way to convert the negative energy one feels into something constructive, and possibly find that they have a talent. Good choice!
That said, don't mistake us all to be dogs simply because most of us are. There are those needles in the hay stack- "diamonds in the rough", whatever you choose to call them - who are genually good people (never entirely absent the desires that humanity is cursed with, mind you.)
I am not sure if you intentionally repeated the word "here" in the seventh line, but thought I would mention it.
Again, good read! Look forward to more!

[pixie dust]

Thank you!

[wadley gurl]

[pixie dust]

Thanks FRIEND!
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