Does he know I cry
These tears on the
on the inside…
& Fight to not to
Show them on the
Outside…
Does he even care If I
Die.
Like I am on the inside…
He said He loved me…
Was that even
True…. Or just
One of his lies..
Most my poems talk
Bout him…
Just like this one does…
Now I'm holding…
Day to…
Hoping & wondering Why I
Still even care. If he
Even thinks a single
Thought about me…
Maybe if he even worries,
Why would he…
Because…
Maybe….
He wants me
To be in pain..
So I sit & think…
Can I still do better….
Only God knows…
Not I..
So I will see…
What he has planned for me!
Does he know ?
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Does he know ?
Let the light god shin on you
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Re: Does he know ?
A heartfelt cry indeed. Read it over to yourself to check for a few redundancies where repetitions cause a stutter that isn't needed.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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Re: Does he know ?
Yeah..There maybe alot of errors...I was in tear as I wrote this..lol!
Thanks!!!
Thanks!!!
Let the light god shin on you
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i really like the poems of yours i've read! keep up the good work! i especially like the way you write, and how you tlak as ifits like your talking to your oun spirt, asking yourself quesitons... its awesome!
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