People Say I get What I want
Poeple Just Dont Know
The Whole Story
They Dont Know The REAL ME
Only The Mask
I let them See
The Person I pretend to be
The Real Me
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leapster
The Real Me
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heinzs
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Re: The Real Me
I'd drop the word "they" in line five.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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heinzs
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Re: The Real Me
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
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psychotic pretender
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Re: The Real Me
this un was good too
good write, good read
good write, good read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
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pixie dust
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