Pain.....

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leapster

Pain.....

Post by leapster » Tue Mar 04, 2008 2:17 pm






You fear what might repeat
A Pain That Is Not weak
Acting strong trying hard to be
But weak you are and always will be
Pushing away is what you do best
To hide the pain from the rest
to hide the face ..The face of pain… and defeat
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Re: Pain.....

Post by heinzs » Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:13 pm

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Re: Pain.....

Post by His Barbie Doll » Tue Mar 11, 2008 1:54 am

It's short, sweet, and to the point, and very well done! It packs a punch for me... well done!!!

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Re: Pain.....

Post by poetgirl122 » Wed Mar 12, 2008 4:51 am

you did a good job with this poem, I liked the way it was written and its message. :bow:
***Im stronger than the strongest drug you ever had. Mix them all together and i'd still be twice as bad. I know you wants some more.***
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