I miss you..

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pixie dust
Clearwater Poet
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I miss you..

Post by pixie dust » Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:00 am

I miss you..
It’s been like
Forever even thought
its only been a week.
I can’t stay away..

It hurts not to
See your shining face..
Or feel
The wonder of your touch.
The way you hold me close…

When we shared
our first kiss.
That was a truly great time..
I love you.

I don’t know how I
Lived without you before.
Without you I know I would fall….

I loved you
the first time I saw you…
I knew in my heart
you was the one I wanted forever..
No…
Needed forever

You are the one
I want to grow old with….
share my life with…
every moment
I want you
And no other in my life!
:angel:
Let the light god shin on you

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psychotic pretender
Mistress of Shadows
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Re: I miss you..

Post by psychotic pretender » Sun Feb 03, 2008 11:34 am

one thing i missed when i was editing for you
pixie dust wrote:Forever even thought
thought=though

sorry i missed that

great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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poetgirl122
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Re: I miss you..

Post by poetgirl122 » Wed Feb 06, 2008 6:35 am

great poem, it really sucks to be heart brocken, i know how you feel.loved the poem. :thewave:
***Im stronger than the strongest drug you ever had. Mix them all together and i'd still be twice as bad. I know you wants some more.***

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pixie dust
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Re: I miss you..

Post by pixie dust » Wed Feb 06, 2008 2:38 pm

:angel: Thank you! :angel:
Let the light god shin on you

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