The Passion Of Pain

[pixie dust]

Roses of red & kisses the same.

That night ended with unwanted shame & pain.

She said no, but he yes.

No one believed her.

So she took a test.

This one test they both did pass.

So people justed wandered around calling her a ho.

She took a sharp knife & cut all her pain & shame away.

Until she staying & laying in her own blood

asked god with her last breath why he would let this happen to

[psychotic pretender]

like i said before

nice

really good job little sister

im proud of you for finally showing others your poetry

good write, good read

[pixie dust]

thankz...big sis..love ya

[psychotic pretender]

welcome much

[nekot]

Sad write Pixie.....too often a reality.

I enjoy the title too, very apt play on words.

[pixie dust]

Thank you!

[heinzs]

It is a cruel fact of life that is difficult to put into words. You've done a good job conveying the feelings here.

[pixie dust]

Thank you greatly!

[Queen]

this is true poetry. formless emotions that don't need vivid imagry because the image is conveyed in the feeling of pain. you are talented~~~

[pixie dust]

Thank you soooo much!

[poetgirl122]

it was sad, but amaizing. great poem. keep up the good work

[pixie dust]

Thank you!