If you had one chance to take everything back
take your sins into the void
would you take the fall
let the blood flow out
or suffer silently under the darkest sky
feel you heart fill with dirty blood
disease ridden rotten corpse you are
can you touch it?
can you feel the blood and my hands
feel the maggots within us all?
would you take that chance to save or to die
take a step out the bloody door
the blood in my viens runs truly as the world spins
yet i can feel only the pressure of my heart exploding
bloodheart
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blackbanner
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bloodheart
"so now he waits
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
BlackBanner
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
BlackBanner
Re: bloodheart
deep write...alot of emotion to it
Love and Peace
Kimmy
Love and Peace
Kimmy
Mortal lovers must not try to remain at the first step; for lasting passion is the dream of a harlot and from it we wake in despair.-C. S. Lewis
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Re: bloodheart
I truly love this & I enjoyed this so greatly keep up the great work!Let the light god shin on you
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Re: bloodheart
nice
i likes it alot
great write, great read
i likes it alot
great write, great read
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
....
......................................
...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''
Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came
Robert Browning 1812-1889
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blackbanner
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Re: bloodheart
thanks everyone. 
"so now he waits
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
BlackBanner
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
BlackBanner
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poetgirl122
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Re: bloodheart
i like this one, good job. it was written greatly, and with good detail. i loved your poem, keep'em coming!
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