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**I am the Painter** Forum Award Winner
Forum Award Winner: September 22, 2007
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I am the Painter
I am the painter
whose strokes are fast
brutal, in fact
the red lines
so sharp in his face
I paint him with hate
as my fists turn red
blurred images of
angry eyes and death
turn my hate to rage
insane with pain
I roar
painting my emotion on his face
in devastation
This one received over 500 views in 6 weeks!
I am the Painter
I am the painter
whose strokes are fast
brutal, in fact
the red lines
so sharp in his face
I paint him with hate
as my fists turn red
blurred images of
angry eyes and death
turn my hate to rage
insane with pain
I roar
painting my emotion on his face
in devastation
"so now he waits
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
BlackBanner
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
BlackBanner
wow, powerful imagery!! this from personal experience at all?! if so, hope you relieve yourself of this anger soon!
luvs Gingy xx
luvs Gingy xx
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lol u know how you feel, I quite often wish I was talented in the arts so as to take out my frusrations on something like this. Still, that's what poetry is for as well, eh? lol.
Luvs Gingy xx
Luvs Gingy xx
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hehe oh rite i see, sorry it took so long to reply, i have been away on holiday in Devon for 10days. Still I love the poem neways.
Your virtual pal, Gingy x
Your virtual pal, Gingy x
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..slashing that emotion across his face..with force and with revenge..I could really see the blood/hate splashing on the walls in this one...
.very effective.
.jeanne.
.very effective.
.jeanne.
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
flickr -jeannerene photostream
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