His Unreadable Soul

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His Unreadable Soul

Post by soullesspoet » Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:03 pm

inside me
live
the tattered remains
of a soul that once loved
and was never loved in return
which now walks me through each day
in a daze
only seeing
-HIS-
face:
the piercing blue eyes
the chiseled features
the slim yet toned build.
I memorize each aspect
knowing that I will never get the chance
to really see
to really understand
what lies behind
that magnificent
-UNREADABLE-
face.
I will never know
a single thought or desire
from that troubled
-SOUL-
the one that is so like mine.

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Post by heinzs » Sat Jul 28, 2007 1:10 pm

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Post by Gingy » Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:38 am

wow, powerful and exciting poetry here!! I love the title. good work.

luv Gingy x
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