Complicate Me

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soullesspoet

Complicate Me

Post by soullesspoet » Sat Jul 07, 2007 2:27 pm

you have to complicate things,
don't you.
you just have to cling on to me,
not knowing
all the same.
you just have to be so like me,
we share the same insanity
I just want to let you GO

...but you are me
and I am you...
I guess I'll just have to let go
and spiral out of control
but land in
-HIS-
arms
not yours

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Gertrude
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Post by Gertrude » Sun Jul 08, 2007 3:44 pm

Cool........You go to God your way and I'll go to God mine.......TRUCE.......

Fag break.......someone took my white lighter so I have to beg a light on the streets........my self care attempts get saboutaged a lot.....no worries.....I get knocked down, but I get up again pretty quickly......
Gertrude the Groupie loves the groups that are provided at the counseling center

Gertrude the Groupie wants to be the Queen of the Silver Dollar

Gertrude the Groupie wants to go to the Freakers Ball

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jeannerené
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Post by jeannerené » Sun Jul 08, 2007 10:39 pm

soullesspoet.......

... there is a bit of insanity written into this..which I quite liked ...but with a final note of the positive .....

..jeanne...
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots…
~ jeannerené

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Post by soullesspoet » Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:38 pm

thanks gertrude
I find too that I tend to fall a lot
but it generally takes me a long time to get back up...
any tips? :mrgreen:

and jeannerené...
thank you
I quite like ending with a contradiction or surprise
it just doesn't happen that often...

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