through ravens hair
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through ravens hair
Through ravens hair,
cold eyes stare
tempered by hate
and unlucky fate.
Searching upward,
looking skyward.
Gazing all night
until first light.
By dawn he sleeps
while his mother weeps,
another sad day
nothing to say.
When he awakes
eyes like lakes
dripping tears,
wishing for cures.
another day of hell
waiting for the bell
missing him so
wishing he didn't go
A fathers death,
drawn his last breath:
depression
obsession.
Never speaks,
hasn't in weeks.
Missing link;
hearts sink.
Why, why
goodbye?
Always pain,
going insane.
cold eyes stare
tempered by hate
and unlucky fate.
Searching upward,
looking skyward.
Gazing all night
until first light.
By dawn he sleeps
while his mother weeps,
another sad day
nothing to say.
When he awakes
eyes like lakes
dripping tears,
wishing for cures.
another day of hell
waiting for the bell
missing him so
wishing he didn't go
A fathers death,
drawn his last breath:
depression
obsession.
Never speaks,
hasn't in weeks.
Missing link;
hearts sink.
Why, why
goodbye?
Always pain,
going insane.
Last edited by blackbanner on Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:16 am, edited 2 times in total.
"so now he waits
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
BlackBanner
in his own little hell
surrounded by the
the very things he came to escape"
BlackBanner
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...blackbanner....
...first check the beginning of poem ... javascript text somehow got copied...
...there is a lot being said in this write .... it is deeply emotional and honest ... I find it very compelling, and the simply cry of pain and loneliness catches and captures the reader heart....
... very nice ....
... jeanne...
...first check the beginning of poem ... javascript text somehow got copied...
...there is a lot being said in this write .... it is deeply emotional and honest ... I find it very compelling, and the simply cry of pain and loneliness catches and captures the reader heart....
... very nice ....
... jeanne...
... and his words purge up and outward,
expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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expelled and onward through desert dust swallowed,
sands he says that gorge on simple sensibilities.
And, now he spits fragments, grit, extended vowels and elongated syllables
over cracked lips. Their sounds fall
piling round his boots… ~ jeannerené
~breathe~
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this poem makes me hear the cry of ones lonely heart..painful and sad and full of emotion...
Reach Out And Love Someone
Slow Down And Look around
You Will Find Someone Who Needs You.....
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