Emotions

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Blackchaos88
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Emotions

Post by Blackchaos88 » Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:26 pm

I'm gonna write a poem, it's a poem with a twist.
I'm writing it with a razorblade, i'm writing it on my wrist.
Let my blood hit the ground, can you turn my life around?

Life is too long to live, my secrets to no one I give.
My life is so blue, but then why do I love you?
I sit in silence, joining no one's alliance.
I always seem to be alone, tired of hearing you voice drone.

No relief to get me by, not even getting high.
Is there a reason I am so cold? Just trying to act bold.
Life isn't what everyone said, just wanna crawl away and end up dead.
Many things I should know, but how can I let them show?

Music is my only way of staying sane, trying to hide all of my pain.
How is giving up a crime? When there is just too much time.
Spaces to fill, wish someone would just kill.
Invisible in everything I do, to everyone even you!

Every minute spent, never making a dent.
Waiting for my time of death, how long can I hold my breath?
Hearing you say, "she's finally gone", where did I ever go wrong?
Why do i think like this? Why is it everyone's love I dismiss?

Razor sitting on my wrist, dig in and twist.
Dark red blood slides down my skin, as tears drip from my chin.
The room grows faint, can't tell the colour of the paint.
Now I'm lost can't be found, as my body lays motionless on the ground.

You were never there when I needed you most, now you're haunted by my ghost.
Do you mourn, or do you cry, now you realize that I couldn't get by.
My life was short, as you sit huddled in your fort.
You cared for me, but you couldn't let anyone see.

Now I've left this awful place, never again will you see my face.
But I told you before, would you like to hear it once more?
I love you, that wasn't so hard to do.
What do you have to say to me, will your words be worth saving me?

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nekot
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Post by nekot » Sun Feb 11, 2007 1:02 am

moving piece .... deep .... sad

I can relate, like many others.

I think perhaps the opposite of love isn't hate, but is indifference.
~eloquently scattered~
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