Truth
- beautifullyburnt
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Truth
When your eyes look into mine,
Are they then your golden rhyme?
When your thoughts become his,
Will I have no more to give?
What do you see?
I'm lost in misery.
And my pulse begins to race,
As I look upon your smiling face.
From all the pain that burns inside
I cannot run, I cannot hide.
I cannot live a life like this,
Go
No more
You're now his.
Are they then your golden rhyme?
When your thoughts become his,
Will I have no more to give?
What do you see?
I'm lost in misery.
And my pulse begins to race,
As I look upon your smiling face.
From all the pain that burns inside
I cannot run, I cannot hide.
I cannot live a life like this,
Go
No more
You're now his.
My life is a poster pasted on a wall of forgotten dreams
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- ninian
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nice use of rhyme and meter, i like how your lines get shorter toward the end, and the feeling of loss and ... not "giving up" but more like resigning oneself...comes in with the final stanza
well done!
(and welcome to the ppages!)
Ninian
well done!
(and welcome to the ppages!)
Ninian
Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly.
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i feel your pain :( i wish things don't ever have to happen this way, but it is the sadness that will always be the other side of happiness, without it there would be no happiness at all, once again, nice write
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“Judge a man by his questions rather than by his answers” -Voltaire
"True friends stab you in the front" -Go Oscar Wilde!
“To succeed in life, you need two things: ignorance and confidence.” -Go Mark Twain!
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