Dreadful Existence of Being

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Dreadful Existence of Being

Post by thief of dreams » Mon Jul 22, 2013 2:51 am

I’m just a ghost
In a world of solidified
Circumstances
Wishing I could just
Magically disperse
Into the air or the sea
And be done with this mundane
Dreadful existence of being
"Thoughts are the shadows of our feelings - always darker, emptier and simpler."
Friedrich Nietzsche

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Re: Dreadful Existence of Being

Post by nekot » Mon Jul 22, 2013 7:00 am

I feel like this sometimes.

I like the description "solidified circumstances"

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Re: Dreadful Existence of Being

Post by bags123 » Mon Jul 22, 2013 8:55 am

One good thing about hitting bottom,....there's no place left to go but up. :hello:
I prefer to keep an open mind,....but not so much that my brains fall out.- Carl Sagan
Your brain is like an umbrella. It only works when it's open- Someone Smart


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