No exit, only entrances.

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soular
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No exit, only entrances.

Post by soular » Mon Sep 12, 2011 12:28 pm

When a door is opened,
there is another to be.

Time.

Now, in time
and Now, in no time.

In a heartbeat.

Songs ain't me.
I am, like you.
Sing.

Unison.

Everything is alright
if you think it is.

Everything is alright
unless you think.

Countless figure.

"Is that one plus one equals two making the world go round
together with that one plus one is unequal to two?"

"Seamlessly"
Last edited by soular on Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:41 pm, edited 7 times in total.

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Re: No exit, only entrances.

Post by moonflower » Thu Sep 22, 2011 9:05 pm

i was 'hooked' by the first 2 lines..enjoyed! :thumbsup:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: No exit, only entrances.

Post by soular » Sun Sep 25, 2011 10:13 am

Thank you!! Moon. :grin:

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Re: No exit, only entrances.

Post by poeticpiers reborn » Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:39 pm

endings lead to new beginnings
Each door has two sides

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Re: No exit, only entrances.

Post by soular » Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:06 am

Thanks much for your comment, poeticpiers reborn.

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