Attraction
Your sweet perfume
assails my senses
reeling, I fall in love... again
Pessimism
Why shall I worry
about tomorrow...
it will come in spite of me
Weather Report
Always carry your umbrella
dark clouds move faster
than the bright sun
Three Haiku (non-traditional)
Moderators: Spazway, moonflower
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
- Posts: 8419
- Joined: Tue Dec 18, 2001 12:01 am
- Tag line: Do no harm
- Location: Novato, CA
- Contact:
Three Haiku (non-traditional)
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
***************************************
My Poet's Page Archive | Topics I've started
- moonflower
- enchanted by the magic
- Posts: 2190
- Joined: Sun Mar 24, 2002 12:01 am
- Location: longview tx
Re: Three Haiku (non-traditional)
i love all these!..my fave is the pessimism one..great work heinzs!
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
- Posts: 8419
- Joined: Tue Dec 18, 2001 12:01 am
- Tag line: Do no harm
- Location: Novato, CA
- Contact:
Re: Three Haiku (non-traditional)
Thanks Val. Was trying to avoid the 5-7-5 pattern but retaining 17 syllables.
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
***************************************
My Poet's Page Archive | Topics I've started
- soular
- Brain Beach
- Posts: 903
- Joined: Sat Jan 12, 2002 12:01 am
- Tag line: Love and only love
- Location: Tokyo
- Contact:
Re: Three Haiku (non-traditional)
Depth of a mid-summer late afternoon.perfume senses love
Why tomorrow come
Always move bright
I enjoyed the feel.
Nothing is here without love.
https://soundcloud.com/brain-beach
https://www.instagram.com/brain_beach
https://soundcloud.com/brain-beach
https://www.instagram.com/brain_beach
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 5 guests