Three Haiku (non-traditional)

Topics I've started · Post by **heinzs** » Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:57 pm

Attraction

Your sweet perfume
assails my senses
reeling, I fall in love... again

Pessimism

Why shall I worry
about tomorrow...
it will come in spite of me

Weather Report

Always carry your umbrella
dark clouds move faster
than the bright sun

Post by **moonflower** » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:13 pm

i love all these!..my fave is the pessimism one..great work heinzs!

Topics I've started · Post by **heinzs** » Sat Jul 30, 2011 9:28 pm

Thanks Val. Was trying to avoid the 5-7-5 pattern but retaining 17 syllables.

soular · Post by **soular** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 8:45 pm

perfume senses love
Why tomorrow come
Always move bright

Depth of a mid-summer late afternoon.
I enjoyed the feel.

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