Entrancing in Your Masquerade

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Entrancing in Your Masquerade

Post by Jadynara » Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:55 am

Masquerading about the place
Allowing none to see your face
Stealthily you're concealed behind
Qualities of both heart and mind
Untrue to your realities
Exuding pretty falacies
Retreat within that lovely mask
Admitting not your evil task
Decietful to the very end
Each heart you steal will never mend
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011
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Re: Entrancing in Your Masquerade

Post by hockeychickkayla » Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:07 pm

I... LOVE IT!! :thumbsup: I think I need to expand my vocabulary a bit more haha
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Re: Entrancing in Your Masquerade

Post by heinzs » Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:09 pm

A wonderful acrostic poem!

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Re: Entrancing in Your Masquerade

Post by gordy » Sat Nov 06, 2010 4:33 pm

this is awesome! best ive read in a while! :thewave:
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Re: Entrancing in Your Masquerade

Post by Jadynara » Sat Nov 06, 2010 6:21 pm

Thanks guys.
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011
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Re: Entrancing in Your Masquerade

Post by moonflower » Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:25 pm

i too love this!..acrostics are so fun to read, as well as write..great work! :thumbsup:
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