Autumn Winds

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Autumn Winds

Post by Jadynara » Mon Sep 20, 2010 10:27 am

Autumn's breeze has come to rest once more
softly on the contours of my face
Leaving me struck speechless at my door
with the simple beauty of its grace
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011
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Re: Autumn Winds

Post by bags123 » Mon Sep 20, 2010 10:40 am

Hi Jady. Autumn has a beauty all it's own. We're still about 2 weeks away from peak leaf season here in Upstate. It should be breathtaking considering this past summers weather. I can't wait. :thumbsup:
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Re: Autumn Winds

Post by Jadynara » Mon Sep 20, 2010 10:47 am

I live in AZ and we don't really have a changing of seasons here. I am going to Minnesota for the first ten days of october and I am so looking forward to seeing all the leaves change. It's one of my fondest memories of growing up. I can't wait.
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011
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Re: Autumn Winds

Post by moonflower » Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:53 pm

here in east Texas its a little early for all the magical splendor of Autumn..(its one of my favorite seasons too)..your poem beautifully sums up the simple, awe-inspiring beauty of natures hand..thank you for posting it! :thumbsup:
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Re: Autumn Winds

Post by Eternal Poet » Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:50 am

Gentle and welcoming Jady, and excellent imagery from this piece .................. I like.
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