Forever

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Forever

Post by Jadynara » Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:41 pm

A million points of light
Spiraling into oblivion
And the sanctity of forever
So we're lost, at least we've found each other. Take my hand, if we can't find our way out of the dark, we can make our own light. - Nicole M. Goretzke 2011
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Re: Forever

Post by moonflower » Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:34 pm

i love this!..its short and brings a beautiful picture to my mind of brilliant stars and night skies..its great! :thumbsup:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: Forever

Post by soular » Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:21 pm

I like this. Reminds me of the imprinted memory.
The very first encounter with light - Birth. :grin:
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