Stillness

Forum for your haiku, senryu, tanka, sijo and other short subjects of a general nature of 40 words or less.

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Serenem
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Stillness

Post by Serenem » Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:04 am

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fog draped
my horse stands still
in stillness








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soular
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Re: Stillness

Post by soular » Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:12 am

Very picturesque,
I thought with a painting in front feel.
Enjoyed it and thank you for the stillness.
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Serenem
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Re: Stillness

Post by Serenem » Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:13 am

Thank you kindly, soular! Your words made my day.

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Re: Stillness

Post by Laverne Pacquire » Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:46 pm

Elegant, and worth my time :mrgreen:

Serenem wrote:.




fog draped
my horse stands still
in stillness








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Re: Stillness

Post by moonflower » Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:06 pm

i love this..i sensed a beautiful golden mare standing in thick mist in the silent morning ..great imagery!! :thumbsup:
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