Shivering Pine Tree Tanka

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Shivering Pine Tree Tanka

Post by ailill » Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:35 pm

Moon hiding tonight
snow shrouded pine tree shivers
into whistling wind
bird chirps from distant shadows
ice crystals echo in tune

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Re: Shivering Pine Tree Tanka

Post by Tom Watson » Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:55 pm

This was an easy chilling read...thank you for the imagery.

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Re: Shivering Pine Tree Tanka

Post by moonflower » Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:34 pm

absolutely beautiful..your work is a joy to read.. :thumbsup: :grin:
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