Haiku Hot Sun

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Haiku Hot Sun

Post by Level 36 » Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:29 pm

Laugh in the hot sun
In a sense sleeping through war
One day you will learn.


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Re: Haiku Hot Sun

Post by Serenem » Fri Jan 22, 2010 11:50 am

Wow, that is some graphic, Level... it made me fry just looking at it and your hot haiku fit it oh-so-well!

It sort of filled me with a high 'level' of dread and a strong hope that we might all learn before it is too late...

and that gave me chills!

=o}

Serenem~Melinda

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Re: Haiku Hot Sun

Post by moonflower » Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:16 pm

wow!..i too like this very much! love the picture too.. :thumbsup:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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