horse clouds haiku

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Serenem
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horse clouds haiku

Post by Serenem » Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:15 am

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cold, clear morning
my horse and I
exhale clouds




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Re: horse clouds haiku

Post by heinzs » Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:46 pm

Perfect!
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Re: horse clouds haiku

Post by wblogan » Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:12 pm

Very vivid picture,
good work!

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Re: horse clouds haiku

Post by Serenem » Mon Jan 18, 2010 1:12 pm

Thank you, heinzs and wblogan...

I'm glad you like this! :hello:

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Re: horse clouds haiku

Post by moonflower » Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:11 pm

i agree!..this is just lovely! :thumbsup:
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Re: horse clouds haiku

Post by Serenem » Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:09 am

Thank you, Moonflower! The chilly mornings we've had of late and those early morning trips to the barn brought this one to mind! Thank you for reading this!

Serenem~Melinda

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Re: horse clouds haiku

Post by MJPease » Thu Jan 28, 2010 7:55 am

Hello Serenem, It's a wonderfully smooth read. Take Care
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Re: horse clouds haiku

Post by Tom Watson » Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:01 am

Well expressed visual...

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Re: horse clouds haiku

Post by Serenem » Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:13 am

Thank you, Tom and MJPease!

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