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nrip4life
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Post by nrip4life » Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:35 pm

the song plays
he thinks too much
waiting for the player
Old too soon, smart too late....-anonymous

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Re: not there

Post by moonflower » Thu Mar 05, 2009 10:21 pm

i can see him listening to the music with his eyes closed..thinking, perhaps remembering..volumes are spoken is these 3 short lines! excellent work!! :thumbsup: :hello:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: not there

Post by northstar » Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:24 pm

really good
i saw the body of your spirit ..my friend
sometimes you scared me
sometimes i touch you..sometimes i love you

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