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Post by inspired8 » Mon Dec 22, 2008 10:07 pm

雪 が ふって
生命 静止した
死 が 白い




yuki ga futte
seimei seishi shita
shi ga shiroi


falling snow
how motionless life
death so white



c2008 vduna

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Post by Tom Watson » Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:46 pm

Wonderful to read.
Brought back memories of my time in Misawa with my wife.. :crying: .. :shrug:

But that was then, when
the falling snow brought me warmth;
her hand holding mine...
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Post by heinzs » Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:23 pm

Glad I have international characters loaded on my computer...

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Just a thought for you, though, with the title in onji no one will be able to find it using the search engine.
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Post by inspired8 » Wed Dec 24, 2008 7:36 am

:mrgreen: thanx Heinz i am happy you and Tom read it :bow:

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Post by Black Star Shine » Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:15 am

wow! such beauty in so few words! amazing!

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Post by moonflower » Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:12 pm

wow!..i love this! :thumbsup: :grin:
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