The Write Reasons

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The Write Reasons

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:04 am

The Write Reasons

Could it have been God
In the caged eyes
Of the captive’s longing

A thought hidden to me
Cloaked with smoke night time
With wishes written in dust hieroglyphs

Recollected yesterdays
Seem mistranslated forever
Sandcastles to granule stowaways

We are on a path which unfolds
Like the awakening of a symphony of sorrow (Your life)

The only true submission
Exists in the profundity of pain

So allow me to erect a walkway
Lined with memorials
Arching in cathedral shadows
In the death of the day

Exalt the memory
Of the epicenters
Of the appearances

We did it for all of the write reasons
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Re: The Write Reasons

Post by bags123 » Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:46 am

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Re: The Write Reasons

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Tue Oct 21, 2008 10:49 pm

thank you Bags. nice to see you.
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Re: The Write Reasons

Post by moonflower » Mon Oct 27, 2008 11:26 am

your poems always make me ponder and visualize..very captivating! ..thoroughly enjoyed! :thumbsup: :hello:
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