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The Facts

Post by heinzs » Thu Jun 05, 2008 11:32 pm

There is really
only one true "end"...
the rest is just
more of the same.
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Re: The Facts

Post by Milk White Chocolate » Fri Jun 06, 2008 3:00 pm

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I had to think awhile about this one...It can have so many different meanings.
I like it...It makes me think of how precious life can be and how sometimes we worry about things that aren't really of much importance. I don't know if that was what you had in mind when you wrote it and I would be curious to know the meaning behind these words.


I really enjoyed this little piece of yours... :grin:
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Post by heinzs » Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:02 pm

Thanks MWC. My initial motivation was actually a bit more cynical... but I'm glad to be able to see it from your viewpoint.

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Re: The Facts

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:32 am

relation to the piece in all its cynicism. m
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Re: The Facts

Post by preston » Tue Jun 10, 2008 2:58 pm

it's tough all the same you've got to put up with ... just to get to where you're gonna end up anyways

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Post by toshi_becca » Tue Jun 10, 2008 4:53 pm

There is also only one beginning. :2cents:

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Re: The Facts

Post by moonflower » Tue Jun 10, 2008 6:25 pm

your words contain much wisdom..i love the truth of this piece! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Re: The Facts

Post by heinzs » Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:26 pm

Thank you all... this one just came to me while driving to work one morning.
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