May 08

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May 08

Post by moonflower » Tue May 27, 2008 6:01 am

May

golden sun-filled days
springtime-blessed land, sky, and air
May blooms everywhere
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Re: May 08

Post by Milk White Chocolate » Thu May 29, 2008 6:59 am

:thumbsup:

As usual you excel in the art of haiku...
A lovely and sweet read... :grin:
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Re: May 08

Post by Odd D » Thu May 29, 2008 12:47 pm

Excellent poem, Moonflower. I am glad that you enjoy this month. Although I was born on the eighteenth, I still cannot stand it.

Crying from grey skies,
Flooding thoughts and fields with tears,
Poor abused May.

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Birds now plague my door,
Screaming tunes while I try to sleep.
Curse their love of May.


Ha ha... It rains too much here, and the birds that keep getting in our basement annoy me. That said, life is cause enough for celebration and writing, so I can certainly see your side of it. :wink:
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Re: May 08

Post by moonflower » Tue Jun 10, 2008 6:09 pm

thank you so much for those sweet words milk! :hello:


odd D, i thank you too!..i have a son born on May 14 and a daughter born on May 16..i love your poems! :hello:
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