gifts from my womb

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Queen
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gifts from my womb

Post by Queen » Wed May 14, 2008 7:14 pm

the sun rises
and falls on my hopes
but the rise is so beautiful
that i sacrafice my dreams
just for the view
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Re: gifts from my womb

Post by nekot » Wed May 14, 2008 7:54 pm

WOW!!!

Queen....I got chills. This is so very profound.

I must put this in my poetry collection...if you don't mind.



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Re: gifts from my womb

Post by Queen » Wed May 14, 2008 8:34 pm

thank you. you can do whatever you want with it my dear :bow: :hello:
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Re: gifts from my womb

Post by moonflower » Mon May 26, 2008 8:30 am

i got deep and emotional vibes from this!..very well written queen! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Re: gifts from my womb

Post by Queen » Tue May 27, 2008 3:05 pm

any mother knows exactly what i mean!!! tha you for the comments
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Re: gifts from my womb

Post by Queen » Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:58 am

:bump: my babie are growing up so fast, this poem is so fitting to me now
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Re: gifts from my womb

Post by heinzs » Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:18 pm

They do that... my youngest will turn 22 in August.
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Re: gifts from my womb

Post by Queen » Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:31 pm

wow i don't even wanna think about that, my seven year old recently stopped calling me mommy at started calling me mom. not a big deal to most people but it shook me up :crying: :crying: :crying:
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