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Post by OriOnpheOnix » Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:30 pm

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Muted storms surround the sphere.
The newest numbness is captivating.
Furious seas enthralled in spirals.
The stillness of paintings in intervals.

The latest alone in assertions of freeze.
Castle of mind on an immovable foundation.
Withholding all of the secrets bound.
All the times of lost were times of found.

Serpentine skins toughened by the seasons.
Omnipresent expression down upon this imperfect.
Tomorrow once more footsteps upon the path.
Remnants of infinity gilded by winds and breezes.

We could have been all of the things that we are.
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Post by heinzs » Thu Jan 24, 2008 1:04 pm

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Post by nekot » Sun Jan 27, 2008 7:12 pm

A metaphysical write.

I read it a few times, allowing the imagery to paint on the landscape of my mind.

I think of the beginnings of earth, and the expanding of the universe, and the fact that man continues on his path revolving on this sphere that is a snippet piece of the expansion.

Enjoyed it Orion....

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Post by moonflower » Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:29 am

i love this line..

"We could have been all of the things that we are."

a great poem Orion! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Post by OriOnpheOnix » Sun Apr 27, 2008 3:24 am

thank you
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