* R E P E A T

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soular
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* R E P E A T

Post by soular » Thu Dec 13, 2007 11:21 am

* everything goes always the right way

open your eyes, let loose your mind

let the whole be taken right over

and keep it in and out there

everything goes right

* R E P E A T

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Re: * R E P E A T

Post by moonflower » Fri Dec 14, 2007 5:07 am

:hello: :grin:
inside each soul there is music...let the music play..

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Post by soular » Fri Dec 14, 2007 5:17 am

:mrgreen: :grin: thanks much for the read, moon.

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Post by Queen » Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:10 pm

kind of a haunting chant..... i liked it :thumbsup:
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Post by psychotic pretender » Sat Jan 05, 2008 4:53 pm

great write, great read

i likes it much
/My first thought was, he lied in every word,
That hoary cripple, with malicious eye
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...... And yet
Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set,
And blew. ``Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.''

Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came

Robert Browning 1812-1889

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