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Queen
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Dinner date

Post by Queen » Mon Dec 10, 2007 11:16 am

To dinner she wore
her pretty blue depression cloak,
her heavy black sadness boots,
a veil of sorrow
and for a finishing accessory she brought……
a whole bag of issues!

Waiter…..Check please!
Last edited by Queen on Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Dinner date

Post by Queen » Tue Dec 11, 2007 8:12 am

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Re: Dinner date

Post by heinzs » Tue Dec 11, 2007 11:27 am

"veil of sorrow"

other than that one typo, it's great!

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Re: Dinner date

Post by Queen » Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:13 pm

oops! :oops: thank god for spell check! ( i should use it huh!)
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