Universal language

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Universal language

Post by Queen » Thu Nov 08, 2007 6:39 pm

Pain.
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Re: Universal language

Post by heinzs » Thu Nov 08, 2007 6:40 pm

That's gotta be the shortest poem I've read in a very long time...
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Re: Universal language

Post by Queen » Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:28 am

:lol: there were so many thing swimming around in my head and every bit of it was convayed in a single word. it seemed like no matter what else i wanted to say, it was overshadowed and covered in this one word. not to mention that anyone who has ever felt pain will undoubtedly fill in the rest of the poem by heart!
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Re: Universal language

Post by OriOnpheOnix » Fri Nov 09, 2007 10:41 pm

a friend tells himself that pain is temporary, and struggle is forever.

pain in many forms sometimes coming so suddenly in the twilight.
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Re: Universal language

Post by BeeJay » Fri Nov 09, 2007 11:43 pm

May these words bring comfort._______BeeJay

Beyond all words
Reigns silence supreme
In it is written
Yearnings of our dreams

Baru Gobira 2003 [ From Penn Rain- A Book of Poems]
If the Universe was a little smaller , I may just be able to reach out to you. Copyright © 2009 Baru Gobira
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Re: Universal language

Post by Queen » Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:24 pm

thank you both for the words of insperation. the pain is not overwhelming, only constant
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Re: Universal language

Post by moonflower » Sun Nov 11, 2007 3:34 pm

i love how just that one word truly encompasses a universal language that everyone can relate to!..an excellent poem Queen!! :thumbsup: :grin:
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Re: Universal language

Post by Queen » Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:19 am

:bow: thank you moonflower. i hoped someone would get it!!! bravo on your interpretation :hello:
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