Universal language
Moderators: Spazway, moonflower
Universal language
Pain.
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....
- heinzs
- The Fat Cat
- Posts: 8419
- Joined: Tue Dec 18, 2001 12:01 am
- Tag line: Do no harm
- Location: Novato, CA
- Contact:
Re: Universal language
That's gotta be the shortest poem I've read in a very long time...
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed Be.
***************************************
My Poet's Page Archive | Topics I've started
Re: Universal language
there were so many thing swimming around in my head and every bit of it was convayed in a single word. it seemed like no matter what else i wanted to say, it was overshadowed and covered in this one word. not to mention that anyone who has ever felt pain will undoubtedly fill in the rest of the poem by heart!
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....
- OriOnpheOnix
- vOrtiginOusvOrtex
- Posts: 217
- Joined: Fri Feb 04, 2005 5:25 am
- Location: Michigan
- Contact:
Re: Universal language
a friend tells himself that pain is temporary, and struggle is forever.
pain in many forms sometimes coming so suddenly in the twilight.
pain in many forms sometimes coming so suddenly in the twilight.
* * *
)))(((
-Nirvana Inferno-
- BeeJay
- Babbling Brook Poet
- Posts: 355
- Joined: Mon Feb 05, 2007 9:02 am
- Tag line: A Future in Words
- Location: Hyderabad India
- Contact:
Re: Universal language
May these words bring comfort._______BeeJay
Beyond all words
Reigns silence supreme
In it is written
Yearnings of our dreams
Baru Gobira 2003 [ From Penn Rain- A Book of Poems]
Beyond all words
Reigns silence supreme
In it is written
Yearnings of our dreams
Baru Gobira 2003 [ From Penn Rain- A Book of Poems]
If the Universe was a little smaller , I may just be able to reach out to you. Copyright © 2009 Baru Gobira
Re: Universal language
thank you both for the words of insperation. the pain is not overwhelming, only constant
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....
- moonflower
- enchanted by the magic
- Posts: 2190
- Joined: Sun Mar 24, 2002 12:01 am
- Location: longview tx
Re: Universal language
i love how just that one word truly encompasses a universal language that everyone can relate to!..an excellent poem Queen!!
Re: Universal language
thank you moonflower. i hoped someone would get it!!! bravo on your interpretation
No one is free.......if you disagree, try to skate board down the street....
Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests