remembering

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richie
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remembering

Post by richie » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:28 am

sparrows singing as
the old man remembers
summer years





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Post by moonflower » Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:39 am

oh i love this one Richard!..bittersweet and full of nostalgia.. :thumbsup: :lol:
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Post by richie » Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:11 pm

thanks love very kind remarks

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Post by poetonadryspell » Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:52 pm

nice, i can't writ short little poems like that.
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Post by richie » Wed Jul 12, 2006 12:36 am

I think you can its hard but rewarding give it a try and thanks for looking in

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Post by heinzs » Thu Jul 05, 2007 11:22 am

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Post by moonflower » Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:18 am

i still love this so much! :grin: :grin:
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